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Side Quest: [Lvl 9] Sound of Music + Strange Music

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Location: Calderock Village Level: 9 NPC: Merchant May Inconsistency/Grammar Errors/Typos Description: " So what is it . . .?" is a weird and inaccurate response Suggestion: " So, what about it . . .?" fits better -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Description: "but I rather play" is incomplete Suggestion: "but I'd rather play" -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Description: "So while you haeve away adventuring" is incorrect Suggestion: "So while you were away adventuring" -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Description: [Player Name] is in a darker shade of brown Suggestion: Retain the default orange color for the [Player Name] -

Side Quest: [Lvl 9] She's Looking At Me

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Location: Calderock Village Level: 9 NPC: Adventurer's Guild Leader Deckard Inconsistency/Grammar Errors/Typos Description: "Maybe" is an incomplete answer Suggestion: "Maybe [Insert # of days here]" -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- END OF "She's Looking At Me" Summary # of inconsistencies/grammar errors/typos: 1 # of errors: 0 # of bugs: 0 Conclusion Nothing much to say other than it was short.

Side Quest: [Lvl 8] Crystal Point, The Wonderful Brightness

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Location: Calderock Village Level: 8 NPC: Heraldry Scholar Bailey Inconsistency/Grammar Errors/Typos Description: "You have Crystal Point " is incomplete Suggestion: "You have Crystal Points " -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Description: " Glassaultmust have not used" is lacking a space between [Player name] and "must" Suggestion: Add a space between [Player name] and "must" Description #2: "have you ever heard about Crystal Point] ?". There is a close bracket at the end of Crystal point Suggestion #2: Remove close bracket Description #3: " No, Can I use here?/ " is incorrect and makes no sense at all Suggestion #3: "No, I haven't heard about Crystal Points " Description #4: " Ofcourse, I'm expert. " is incomplete and lacks spacing Suggestion #4: " Of course. I'm an ex

Chapter 2: Pursuing the Black Knight [Cleric Main Quest]

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Location: Calderock Village Class: Cleric Level: 9 - 13 Inconsistency/Grammar Errors/Typos Description: " Are there any news about her?" is incorrect Suggestion: " IS there any nest about her?" -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Description: [Player Name] is off a darker shade of the default orange Suggestion: Changed the color to its default orange -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Description: "so he is being taken to be a dangerous man" is inaccurate Suggestion: "so he is being BRANDED to be a dangerous man" -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Description: "he has also wrecked two airships which was coming to Calderock Village from Saint Haven &

Chapter 1: The Girl's Destiny [Cleric Main Quest]

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Location: Mana Ridge Class: Cleric Level: 1 - 9 Inconsistency/Grammar Errors/Typos Description: Close bracket of "Achievement (1)" moves itself to the next line Suggestion: Make the tab longer to fit the entire (1) -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Description #1: The choices have the same flavor text Suggestion #1: Have a different flavor text for choice #2 Description #2: "Two sides of A same coin" isn't quite right Suggestion #2: Change into "Two sides of THE same coin" -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Description: "I will kill every single one of the Dragon Follower in this world!" is incorrect Suggestion: "I will kill every single one of the Dragon Followers  in this world!" -----------------------------------------

Journey to hell starts here

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Location: Mana Ridge Class: Cleric Level: 7 Status: I'm already hating this Here begins my path to eternal damnation.