Chapter 1: The Girl's Destiny [Cleric Main Quest]

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Location: Mana Ridge
Class: Cleric
Level: 1 - 9

Inconsistency/Grammar Errors/Typos

Description: Close bracket of "Achievement (1)" moves itself to the next line
Suggestion: Make the tab longer to fit the entire (1)
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Description #1: The choices have the same flavor text
Suggestion #1: Have a different flavor text for choice #2

Description #2: "Two sides of A same coin" isn't quite right
Suggestion #2: Change into "Two sides of THE same coin"
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Description: "I will kill every single one of the Dragon Follower in this world!" is incorrect
Suggestion: "I will kill every single one of the Dragon Followers in this world!"
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Description: "To Calderock Village, the town of Heroes" overlaps with its white text description
Suggestion: Insert a single line of space between the two texts
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Description: "Where ARE the Orb and the Staff. . .?" is incorrect
Suggestion: "Where IS the Orb and the Staff. . .?"
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Description: Loss of colored orange text for the player
Suggestion: Change text to orange
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Description: "We will re-organised at Frost Hill" is incorrect
Suggestion: "We will reorganize at Frost Hill"
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Description: "DO you move on with the rest?" is confusing
Suggestion: "WILL you move on with the rest?"
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Description: "I doubt the area around Mana Ridge would dangerous" is missing a word
Suggestion: "I doubt the area around Mana Ridge would BE dangerous"
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Description: "(It looks like Cleric Jake" has the incorrect color AND a missing close bracket
Suggestion #1: Change the color to orange for the player
Suggestion #2: Either remove the open bracket or add a close bracket at the end
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Description: "Unlike Cleric's rosary" is missing a word
Suggestion: "Unlike THE Cleric's rosary"

Description #2: "No not only that" is missing a comma
Suggestion: "No, not only that"
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Description: "but it was definitely Cedric" doesn't have [Cedric] in the color red
Suggestion: Make [Cedric] have the color red
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Description: "I'd wager he's gone to ground somewhere nearby" doesn't make any sense
Suggestion: Reword the sentence (It could possible be "underground" rather than "to ground")
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Description: Enemies are still alive even after killing the boss. So far, all mobs would die after the boss is killed, thus, this is inconsistent
Suggestion: Either make a decision to kill all the mobs after the boss is dead or keep the mobs alive after the boss is dead.
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Description: Main Cutscene of the game's subtitles do not follow the Voice Over of the cutscene
Suggestion: Either fix the subtitles to match the Voice Over or remove the subtitles
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END OF "Chapter 1: The Girl's Destiny"

Summary

# of inconsistencies/grammar errors/typos: 15
# of errors: 0
# of bugs: 0

Conclusion

First Main quest in and I'm already having the urge to blow my brains off.

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