Side Quest: [Lvl 13] Argenta's Food

Location: Calderock Village
Level: 13
NPC: Adventurer's Guild Master Deckard

Inconsistency/Grammar Errors/Typos

Description: "I'm still in doubt about she saving you the last time. Heard that she is badly injured" is incorrect
Suggestion: "I'm still in doubt about her saving you the last time. I heard that she is badly injured"


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Description: "Heard that she's great-looking, having eyes that people will fall for. Too bad when we last met, her hood was covering her face" is incomplete.

Suggestion: "I heard that she's great-looking, having eyes that people will fall for. It's too bad when we last met, her hood was covering her face"
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Description: "to harm such charming woman" is incomplete

Suggestion: "to harm such a charming woman"

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Description: Argenta's picture is covering the texts

Suggestion: Set the opacity lower or push the texts in front of the pictures
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Description: "Might be poisonous, but is good for the body"

Suggestion: "It might be poisonous but it's good for the body"
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Description: "How can this even qualifies as tonic. . ." is incorrect


Suggestion: "How can this even qualify as a tonic. . ."
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Description: "Yucks, this taste horrible" is incorrect



Suggestion: "Yuck, this tastes horrible"
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Description: "Send my regards to The Silver Hair Lady" is incorrect




Suggestion: "Send my regards to The Silver Haired Lady"



END OF "Argenta's Food"
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Summary

# of inconsistencies/grammar errors/typos: 8
# of errors: 0
# of bugs: 0

Conclusion



Eh, I've had worse.

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