Chapter 2: Pursuing the Black Knight [Cleric Main Quest]

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Location: Calderock Village
Class: Cleric
Level: 9 - 13

Inconsistency/Grammar Errors/Typos

Description: "Are there any news about her?" is incorrect
Suggestion: "IS there any nest about her?"
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Description: [Player Name] is off a darker shade of the default orange
Suggestion: Changed the color to its default orange
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Description: "so he is being taken to be a dangerous man" is inaccurate
Suggestion: "so he is being BRANDED to be a dangerous man"
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Description: "he has also wrecked two airships which was coming to Calderock Village from Saint Haven" is incorrect and inaccurate
Suggestion: "he has also wrecked two airships which WERE coming FROM Saint Haven TO Calderock Village"
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Description: [Player] text is not colored orange
Suggestion: Convert to colored text
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Description: "We were ambushing to attack the Black Knight" is redundant
Suggestion: "We were ambushing the Black Knight"
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Description: "my master" is inconsistent
Suggestion: "My master"
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Description: Argenta v.s Velskud cutscene has the voice over's be delayed by about a second compared to the subtitles and the animation
Suggestion: Bring forward the voice over timeline by a second early to match the cutscene
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Summary


# of inconsistencies/grammar errors/typos: 8
# of errors: 0
# of bugs: 0



Conclusion

An improvement from Chapter 1 but since it's also noticeably shorter, that might be why the inconsistencies and grammar errors are half of Chapter 1.

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