Side Quest: [Lvl 9] Sound of Music + Strange Music

Location: Calderock Village
Level: 9
NPC: Merchant May

Inconsistency/Grammar Errors/Typos

Description: "So what is it. . .?" is a weird and inaccurate response
Suggestion: "So, what about it. . .?" fits better
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Description: "but I rather play" is incomplete
Suggestion: "but I'd rather play"
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Description: "So while you haeve away adventuring" is incorrect
Suggestion: "So while you were away adventuring"
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Description: [Player Name] is in a darker shade of brown
Suggestion: Retain the default orange color for the [Player Name]
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Description: "once I have verify the music sheet" is incorrect
Suggestion: "once I have verified the music sheet"
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Description: "there is a problem with this music sheet are you and me for now" is incorrect
Suggestion: "there is a problem with this music sheet is you and me for now"
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END OF "Sound of Music + Strange Music"

Summary

# of inconsistencies/grammar errors/typos: 6
# of errors: 0
# of bugs: 0

Conclusion

It was okay other than the fact it takes 30 minutes to do a simple side quest.




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