Location: Calderock Village Level: 13 NPC: Merchant May Inconsistency/Grammar Errors/Typos Description: "Hey H ey!" lacks a comma and the second Hey is capitalized Suggestion: "Hey, hey!" Description #2: " I have a big juicy secret piece of information" is incorrect Suggestion #2: " I've got some big, juicy secret piece of information" -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Description: "my store sells the best quality item money can buy" has the word item in singular Suggestion: "my stores sells the best quality item s money can buy" -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Description: "Because we pride ourselves with the lowest prices for all our best quality product, no gimmicks. . . " is incorrect and awkward to read S
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