Side Quest: [Lvl 9] Sound of Music + Strange Music
Location: Calderock Village Level: 9 NPC: Merchant May Inconsistency/Grammar Errors/Typos Description: " So what is it . . .?" is a weird and inaccurate response Suggestion: " So, what about it . . .?" fits better -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Description: "but I rather play" is incomplete Suggestion: "but I'd rather play" -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Description: "So while you haeve away adventuring" is incorrect Suggestion: "So while you were away adventuring" -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Description: [Player Name] is in a darker shade of brown Suggestion: Retain the default orange color for the [Player Name] -