Side Quest: [Lvl 9] (Title) Immortal Lvl 1 - Secrets to Survival

Location: Calderock Village
Level: 9
NPC: Master Warrior Chandler


Inconsistency/Grammar Errors/Typos

Description: Unrecognizable texts
Suggestion: Register the unrecognizable texts or use recognizable texts
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Description: "Hear more about Titles" does not fit the flavor text response
Suggestion: "I don't know what a Title is. Can you explain?" or something similar
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Description: "First, press Pbutton" is incomplete and lacking space
Suggestion: "First, press the P button"
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Description: "it will help you far more than any armour or a comrade" is incorrect
Suggestion: "it will help you far more than any armor or comrade"
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Description: "You're covered with that scars" is incorrect
Suggestion: "You're covered with scars"
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END OF "(Title) Immortal Lvl 1 - Secrets to Survival"

Summary

# of inconsistencies/grammar errors/typos: 5
# of errors: 0
# of bugs: 0

Conclusion

Not much errors but it was short, so, that explains it.

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