Side Quest: [Lvl 9] Melody of Memories I and II

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Location: Calderock Village
Level: 9
NPC: Master Archer Adelynn

Inconsistency/Grammar Errors/Typos

Description: "I have an unfinished job to take care" is incomplete
Suggestion: "I have an unfinished job to take care of"
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Description: "Do you have any question?" is incorrect
Suggestion: "Do you have any questions?"
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Description: "Like you mention" is incorrect
Suggestion: "Like you mentioned"
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Description: "I would like to hear Adelynn's play" is incorrect
Suggestion: "I would like to hear Adelynn play"
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Description: The "something" in the player's response is being blocked by Adelynn's picture
Suggestion: Move the "something" a line down
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Description: "What are they arguing in about?" is incorrect
Suggestion: "What were they arguing about?"
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Description: "But why do they fight?" is incorrect
Suggestion: "But why did they fight?"
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Description: "Eureke always have a small notebook" is incorrect
Suggestion: "Eureke always had a small notebook"
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END OF "Melody of Memories I and II"

Summary

# of inconsistencies/grammar errors/typos: 8
# of errors: 0
# of bugs: 0

Conclusion

3 side quests in and I'm already feeling the fatigue. I'm also starting to notice a trend that most errors seem to be either just 1-2 error's or 5+.

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