Side Quest: [Lvl 12] The Famous Dish
Location: Calderock Village
Level: 12
NPC: Merchant May
Level: 12
NPC: Merchant May
Inconsistency/Grammar Errors/Typos
Description: "a friend living in Prairie Town Supposedly, it's" is lacking a period after "Town"
Suggestion: "a friend living in Prairie Town. Supposedly, it's"
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Description: "Not like I able to fight" is incorrect
Suggestion: "Not like I'm able to fight"
Description #4: The 2nd option "trying to chomp me up" is a continuation of option 1
Description #2: "Even Hound won't eat this" is incorrect
Suggestion: "a friend living in Prairie Town. Supposedly, it's"
Description: "Not like I able to fight" is incorrect
Suggestion: "Not like I'm able to fight"
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Description: "I hear even wild Hound will follow you" is incorrect
Suggestion: "I heard even wild Hounds will follow you"
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Description: "Merchant May created a bizarre chemicals" is incorrect
Suggestion: "Merchant May created some bizarre chemical"
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Description: "this sound weird and smelly funny to me" is incorrect, inaccurate, and weird
Suggestion: "this looks weird and smells funny to me"
Description #2: "No, I would think is possible" is inaccurate
Suggestion: "No, I don't think that's possible"
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Description: "and see how the Hound will react" is incorrect
Suggestion: "and see how the hounds will react"
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Description: "is to carry Food for Obedience" is inconsistent
Suggestion: Color the [Food for Obedience] with the standard item color (Red)
Description #2: "If the Hound are friendly" is incorrect
Suggestion #2: "If the hounds are friendly"
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Description: "The smelling the nutritious food" is incorrect
Suggestion: "The scent of the nutritious food"
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Description: "Were the Hound nice to you?" is incorrect
Suggestion: "Were the hounds nice to you?"
Description #2: "with expectation in the eyes" is incorrect
Suggestion #2: "with expectation in her eyes"
Description #3: "if by 'nice to you', you meant" is incorrect and incomplete
Suggestion #3: "if by 'nice to you', you mean [insert effect here]"
Description #4: The 2nd option "trying to chomp me up" is a continuation of option 1
Suggestion #4: Combine option 1 and 2 and create a different response for option 2
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Description: "What am I going to do with leftovers?" is incorrect
Suggestion: "What am I going to do with the leftovers?"
Description #2: "Even Hound won't eat this" is incorrect
Suggestion #2: "Even hounds won't eat this"
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Bugs
Description: The first part of the quest finishes even though the [Player] has not yet done the task to hunt down hounds
(1) [Player] is tasked to hunt down hounds
(2) Right after getting the task, it is then shown that the [Player] has finished said task, even though they have not done anything yet
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Description: When the dialogue box presents these 2 choices to the [Player]
(1) Choosing Option 1
Description: The dialogue is missing and say nothing but "k"
(2) Choosing Option 2
Description: The game forces you out of the dialogue
After picking the 2nd option, you go out of the NPC's dialogue
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END OF "The Famous Dish"
Summary
# of inconsistencies/grammar errors/typos: 10
# of errors: 0
# of bugs: 2
Conclusion
Oh no. The bugs are increasing.
O h n o
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