Side Quest: [Lvl 11] (Title) Immortal Lv. 2 - Steel Skin I & II

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Location: Calderock Village
Level: 11
NPC: Blacksmith Corin

Inconsistency/Grammar Errors/Typos

Description: "i can help you" has the "i" in lowercase
Suggestion: "I can help you"
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Description: "find the balance between nature defense and armour" is incorrect
Suggestion: "find the balance between natures defense and armour"

 Description #2: "It has been the material" is confusing
Suggestion #2: "It's the material"
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Description: "Yeah, armour as a feather" is confusing
Suggestion: "Yeah, feather for armour"
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Description: "but you've got me win me on strength" is incorrect
Suggestion: "but you've got me beat on strength"
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Description: "I didn't help much" makes no sense for a guy who just got stabbed
Suggestion: "That didn't help much" fits better since I'm guessing [Player] is talking about the spear being yanked out of him
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Description: [Blacksmith Corin] name, which should be on top of the dialogue box, is not there
Suggestion: Place [Blacksmith Corin] on top of where it was
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Description: Achievement (0) has the closed parenthesis moving down the tab
Suggestion: Increase the space of the tab
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Errors

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END OF "(Title) Immortal Lv. 2 - Steel Skin I & II"

Summary

# of inconsistencies/grammar errors/typos: 7
# of errors: 1
# of bugs: 0

Conclusion

And that's the first error I've got. Oof.

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